American Icon Reflection

I feel like my writing started out with tons of content and ideas, but lacked any form of structure, grammar, or sign of correct writing. Basically, the revisions were to correct the textbook flaws, not the lack of content. I feel like the first draft, for me, is always the one with the most writing, and most ideas, spread across the entire page. I feel like I used short, real stories to capture and pull in the audience, that’s one thing I did a lot. I don’t know about if I had another draft, probably trying to squeeze in one more idea.

(one sentence which stands out to me)“My only true American Icon or American Idol or American influence, was a personal inspiration, it was that high school kid, that friend of my brothers, that friend of mine, Hunter Moskowitz.

This sentence stands out to me because I feel like it’s well written and gets the idea across to the reader. I feel like this is one of my best sentences, because I actually use part of it in the beginning, similar to the loop, I bring the readers back to the beginning, but expands on the idea with all of the new knowledge they have, to help understand with the new ideas and the old statement from the beginning